Zachary Dellinger (Character) - Revision history

Zachary Dellinger at 22:02, 30 April 2019

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ShatteredAnkh at 15:23, 18 April 2019

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ShatteredAnkh: Undo revision 198663 by ShatteredAnkh (talk)

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Undo revision 198663 by ShatteredAnkh (talk)

ShatteredAnkh: Undo revision 198662 by ShatteredAnkh (talk)

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Undo revision 198662 by ShatteredAnkh (talk)

ShatteredAnkh at 18:41, 17 April 2019

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ShatteredAnkh at 18:40, 17 April 2019

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ShatteredAnkh at 18:40, 17 April 2019

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ShatteredAnkh at 18:37, 17 April 2019

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ShatteredAnkh at 15:51, 17 April 2019

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ShatteredAnkh at 15:49, 17 April 2019

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 On YC114.5.16, Mr. Dellinger’s shuttle was towed to a [[Chemal Tech]] station in [[Vale (System)|Vale]] with significant injuries. Medical responded to the docking bay to treat Mr. Dellinger, who’s injuries were severe. Official Chemal Tech reports from staff indicate the wounds were self-inflicted: Mr. Dellinger had attempted to rip out parts of his capsuleer interface during his voyage back to high-security space, and when that failed, sabotaged his shuttle to explode.
-Mr. Dellinger was transferred to a jump clone as the injuries were too severe. However, within a month, Mr. Dellinger mangled his limbs once again due to some traumatic stimuli, specifically on his right side. He was transferred to [[Deltole (System)|Deltole]] to apply for significant mental rehabilitation at the behest of his family.
+Mr. Dellinger was transferred to a jump clone as the injuries were too severe. However, within a month, Mr. Dellinger reported significant pain in the new jump clones limps and insisted that they be replaced with cybernetics, and scars began to resurface on the skin of the clone as if from some rash or disease. Reports of mental trauma from the SSC have been made, but nothing definitive has been returned.
-SCC reports that his most recent clone has been equipped with cybernetics to replace the disfigured limbs.  General reports indicate that after two years of rehabilitation, he would regularly perform at his mother’s club.
+General reports indicate that after two years of rehabilitation, he would regularly perform at his mother’s club.
 ===Resurgence===

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 |occupation=CEO
 |specialisation=Diplomacy<br>Exploration<br>Fleet Tactics<br>Classical Violin<br>Pianist
-|vessels=XRTI Bijoux<br>XRTI Les Jardins de Genèse
+|vessels=La Belle Topaz<br>Les Jardins de Genèse
 |remarks=Enjoys Large Social Gatherings
 }}

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 |concordid=808-15-3567
 |gender=Male
-|race=[[Gallente]]gardens of genesis
+|race=[[Gallente]]
 |bloodline=[[Ethnic Gallente]]
 |education=[[University of Caille]]

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 |concordid=808-15-3567
 |gender=Male
-|race=[[Gallente]]
+|race=[[Gallente]]gardens of genesis
 |bloodline=[[Ethnic Gallente]]
 |education=[[University of Caille]]

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 |gender=Male
-|race=[[Gallente]]gardens of genesis
+|race=[[Gallente]]
 |bloodline=[[Ethnic Gallente]]
 |education=[[University of Caille]]

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-{{Color box|color=#1b2741|border=#3a5779|padding={{{padding|1em}}}|Accessing Consolidated Cooperation and Relations Command (CONCORD) Intelligence Files on Capsuleer ‘’’Zachary Dellinger’’’.}}
+{{Color box|color=#1b2741|border=#3a5779|padding={{{padding|1em}}}|Accessing Consolidated Cooperation and Relations Command (CONCORD) Intelligence Files on Capsuleer '''Zachary Dellinger'''.}}
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-{{Color box|color=#1b2741|border=#3a5779|padding={{{padding|1em}}}|'''IC:''' Accessing Consolidated Cooperation and Relations Command (CONCORD) Intelligence Files on Capsuleer ‘’’Zachary Dellinger’’’.}}
+{{Color box|color=#1b2741|border=#3a5779|padding={{{padding|1em}}}|Accessing Consolidated Cooperation and Relations Command (CONCORD) Intelligence Files on Capsuleer ‘’’Zachary Dellinger’’’.}}
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-{{Color box|color=#1b2741|border=#3a5779|padding={{{padding|1em}}}|Access approved. Welcome CONCORD Representative..}}
+{{Color box|color=#1b2741|border=#3a5779|padding={{{padding|1em}}}|Access approved. Welcome, CONCORD Representative.}}

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	Several meetings between Mr. Dellinger and his previous associate led to the creation of [[The Xim-Retni Conglomerate (Player Alliance)\|The Xim-Retni Conglomerate]] in Federation Space.		Several meetings between Mr. Dellinger and his previous associate led to the creation of [[The Xim-Retni Conglomerate (Player Alliance)\|The Xim-Retni Conglomerate]] in Federation Space.
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		+	==Physique==
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		+	<nowiki><<DATA EXPUNGED::: RECOMPILING>></nowiki>
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		+	==Behavior==
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		+	<nowiki><<DATA EXPUNGED::: RECOMPILING>></nowiki>

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 |bdate=9 December, YC85
 |bplace=[[Deltole (System) | Deltole VI, the city of 'Genèse']]
-|ddate=23 July, YC112 (Podded)<br>30 May, YC114 (Clone Recovery)
+|ddate=23 July, YC112 (Podded)<br>30 May, YC114 (Medical)
 |birthdate=30 May, YC112
 |corporation=[[Xim-Retni (Player Corporation)|Xim-Retni]]